Tuesday, 19 March 2019
Rhino thief
As I walked into the zoo I saw the Rhino was gone! So I looked around for any clues then I saw something it was a phone number so I called the phone number and someone picked up. So I asked if they have seen a Rhino? they said "yes" so I said "oh good where did you see the Rhino last?" they said "in the carnival" and then I Thanked them and headed to the carnival but the Rhino was all the way at the other side of the carnival! So I had to dodge a lot of people and then I had to get passed some caramel sauce someone spilled all over the floor which made my shoes sticky. but at least the caramel sauce did not go on my face. then I had cotton candy on my face, but the good thing is that I caught the rhino and got the horrible person that stole the Rhino arrested.
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What an awesome piece of writing! I love the way you added detail and descriptive language to hook in your reader. Just remember that each sentence needs to start with a capital letter and end with a full stop, question mark or exclamation mark.
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